21 April, 2010

moderation is the new excess

i wanted for a long time now to write you a poem featuring moose singing of love. just now, i attempted a traditional haiku format but was unsuccessful in finding a good solid filler of 7 syllables. you'll have to wait longer, my loves, but i can promise you* that it will be worth it.


*hell, i can promise you whatever i please. i can promise to stop drinking and swearing so much, but we all know the likelihood of that; a girl has her blog persona to think of, you know.



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much later (like, 12 minutes or thereabouts):

derivative text
that old post modern curse
the moose sing of love

so, what'd you think?




3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Best poem I've read today!

the polish chick said...

and that's saying something...but what is it saying? say what? nevermind.

Anonymous said...

Anorexia is the new obesity!